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Kibin. (2024). The causes and effects of the iranian revolution. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/causes-and-effects-of-iranian-revolution-wosou2FE
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). The causes and effects of the iranian revolution. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/causes-and-effects-of-iranian-revolution-wosou2FE
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("The Causes and Effects of the Iranian Revolution.")
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"The Causes and Effects of the Iranian Revolution." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/causes-and-effects-of-iranian-revolution-wosou2FE
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"The Causes and Effects of the Iranian Revolution." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/causes-and-effects-of-iranian-revolution-wosou2FE.
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