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The most important memory that I can remember was the first time I got a smart phone as well as the day I was admitted to HCC I was 17 years old and I just applied for an admission at HCC which obviously I was accepted A week before I got the phone I and my dad had gone to the school I applied for and submitted some applications we went back and forth from home to my school since we were told to submit some document that we didnt have at that time as a result we had to go back home to get it After we were done for the day we headed home The next day we got a call from the school that some document were missing from the ones we submitted therefore we got the copy and went back to the school to turn them in I was nervous that maybe because I didnt go to high school in the United States I might not get admitted but to my surprise I was admitted but I didnt start taking classes immediately because I was late to enroll for class so I had to wait for the next semester which was summer 2011 After I was admitted to the school and we had submitted the necessary documents everything was set to go but I didnt have a suitable phone to be exact and I thought to myself after all I was going to school to learn nobody was going to pay attention to me or to my phone anyways Before the summer class starts I went to a new student orientation and saw all different types of people with different phones which compared to mine was showy When I got home I told my parent what we did and all When I was done telling my parents what we did I went into my room and I told my sister about
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