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Life tends to offer a variety of opportunities to everyone but it is ones decision to either grasp or stay afraid of grasping these many opportunities Throughout my life I havent given this idea much thought until the summer of 2008 when my once simple life was immediately transformed into a life full of new opportunities and perspectives after a single phone call A phone call I had never imagined my family would have received so soonAfter arriving home from school in Jamaica I greeted my mom and was expecting her to remind me of removing my shoes before entering the house since she knows I frequently forget to do so However on this particular day mom was less concerned whether or not I removed my shoes Her mind was in a different place after yelling Mami Im home she instantly yelled Please come inside dont worry about removing your shoes I stood by the doorway motionless and was startled at her statement However I was glad to take advantage of such a rare offer given the fact that removing my shoes before entering the house wasnt one of my favorite things to do as a child As I smiled and walked inside the house a rush of thoughts filled my mind I kept wondering was I in trouble Did she find the love letter I wrote to my crush and hid under the mattress Please dear God I hope not However knowing mom as well as I did I eventually figured if I was in deep trouble instead of calling me inside shed be waiting for me at the front door I found a sense of relief as I approached her and noticed she was smiling My eyes soon focused on the phone she held in her hands and was fondling with She enthusiastically asked Guess who just called At that very moment it felt like my
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