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The Voice Message As I lay under my warm cotton flannel sheets that Sunday night I pondered the reason why my cell phone had not rung the entire day I had a strange premonition that something wasnt exactly right so my instincts told me to investigate I struggled getting out of the comfortable bed but I managed to put on warmer clothes and head out my door As I stepped out onto the patio the gusty cold wind chilled my whole body Dialing my voice- mail number I heard You have one new message From the first second I heard my best friends voice I could tell she was disturbed and irate about something Her frosty voice said Andrea its me I have to tell you this right now while its fresh in my mind I had 150 in my room and 6000 in my wallet and neither one of them is there any more The only people who were at my house were you and my family so Im going to believe my family over you Andrea I dont know whos more of a fool Me for trusting you or you for thinking you could get away with this Dont try to call me or my family because now everyone despises you and I dont want to have anything to do with you anymore Have a nice life At that very moment I felt my stomach churning and my knees weakening I felt as though someone had just stabbed me in the heart I couldnt believe what she had just said and I went into a state of complete shock I played the message again just to see if this was actual reality and I wasnt just hallucinating Salty tears streamed my face like a cascading waterfall I fled back inside of my room and collapsed on my bed shaking with hysteria and trying to gasp for some air I felt
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