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There was a little girl who always believed in true love fairy tales She had blue eyes blonde hair and was very slim When she was a baby her mother died during her delivery so she never knew her mom Hilary and her dad were not only father and daughter but they were also best friends Every day they would always do something together From throwing the softball to working together at the diner her father ownedHilarys dad name was Hal therefore the diner was called Hals Diner The diner has been opened even before Hilary was born All the workers and staff were Hilarys family Since Mary her mom died everyone there wanted to be always there for her Her dad also married this woman named Stephanie She had two twin girls with another man and she treated them both like princesses Therefore she and Stephanie never grew any kind of relationship Mary and Margret were never too nice to Hilary even though they were step sisters They always thought there were better and much prettier than Hilary Growing up they were always the most popular girls in school and always dodged out there sister in front of their friends One evening Hilary and her dad was sitting up in her be reading fairytales out of her most favorite books All of a sudden all of her teddy bears that were lined up on her dressing started shaking Her pictures started to fall of the walls and her furniture started too swift back and forth Hilary started to get frightened because she knew she was in an earthquake While the earthquake was going on her and her dad was just sitting on the bed looking around Stephanie started screaming from another room so Hal left Hilary and went to go see Stephanie and the girlsThe next day Hilary has never seen her dad again since that day He was killed during the earthquake and
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