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How plants and quite a few other things came to be2nd Draft of a Folk TalebyJared KlingNarrator The story Im about to tell might not be true Or maybe it is Judge for yourselfLong ago when Mother Earth was still young beasts roamed the earth and no plants grew A dog eat dog world A cruel world Man was just walking upright IT was in charge IT was a giant monster Green all over with six claws on each paw giant dagger teeth A monster of monsters A beast of beastsNarrator It is important that you remember IT was greenBut as could be expected on such a world all was not well IT was eating the animals one by one Soon only man and a few of each animal was left They all got together talked it over for animals could talk back then and decided they must get rid of IT To do this they decided to drive IT into a large cave by Fire Mountain in a place we now call Africa and put boulders over the entranceNarrator Did you forget that IT was greenA chance came for Man and the animals to carry out their plan IT chased two birds into the cave the birds left through a secret exit and animals waiting outside push boulders over the entrance IT was trapped ForeverNarrator But back to the treesIT tried to get out Made such a mess all the continents started moving to where they are today IT needed to find a way out IT pushed its arms so hard on the walls of the cave trying to get out ITs arms broke through Then IT got stuck IT couldnt pull ITs arms in or push them out So IT did the only thing it could IT started sucking energy out of the sun what else silly Not a lot No one could notice but IT just started suckingITs arms became plants
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