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King of the Third Grade Blowing the candles out on my birthday cake I thought only of the presents sitting beside the table While eating chocolate cake and chocolate ice cream I stared mysteriously at the gifts What could they be I thought When mom said Its time to open presents I flew past the kitchen chairs and stared with excitement at all the presents Opening them one by one I saved the smallest for last Here you go my older brother said I got this for you I ripped the wrapping paper off and threw it towards the area of the trashcan A pack of Topps football cards lay in my hands My brother knew I like collecting football cards He always seemed to know just what I wanted for my birthdays Yes I said I took off running down the hallway to my bedroom I yelled thanks Sitting on my bed I gazed at my new pack of unopened football cards as if I had x-ray vision My palms sweaty my heart racing I sat with intensipation Hoping that the new Joe Montana card would be inside I barely could hold onto the pack I slowly tore the seam apart on the backside of the pack I removed the loose wrapper and turned the cards over There in all his quarterback glory Joe stared directly at me Mocking the great Joe I threw up my arms in victory Jumping on the bed I yelled YA With all this excitement I had to go pee After carefully placing Joe on my bedside I turned to see the mess between the bathroom and me Pretending to be the great quarterback I took off through the room With a spin I avoided being tackled by yesterdays clothes Jumping over my hot wheels set I had a clear shot to the bathroom After relieving myself I celebrated by yelling Touchdown After
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