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Kibin. (2024). My experience seeing the play "lend me a tenor". http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/my-experience-seeing-the-play-lend-me-a-tenor-VTP9SD3p
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Bob's feedback:
"Your second paragraph allows your reader to feel the excitement of seeing the play. This would make a great intro paragraph as the current first paragraph really isn't needed.
You bring some good insights to light here, but they are disorganized. For example, in the third paragraph, you sandwich a description of the seating experience between analyses of two characters. Instead, group like subjects into a single paragraph and start a new one to discuss a different aspect of your experience.
While making this a personal experience is fine, it's a good idea to limit phrases like "I would have to say/I must say." These phrases only serve as filler and make the essay sound too informal."
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Kibin. (2024). My experience seeing the play "lend me a tenor". http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/my-experience-seeing-the-play-lend-me-a-tenor-VTP9SD3p
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("My Experience Seeing the Play "Lend Me a Tenor".")
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"My Experience Seeing the Play "Lend Me a Tenor"." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/my-experience-seeing-the-play-lend-me-a-tenor-VTP9SD3p
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