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In July of 2011 I went on a cruise with my family It was a life changing experience seven beautiful days in paradise We arrived on the ship on a Wednesday I spent the rest of the day sleeping When we woke up on Thursday we explored many things with my family on an island called Andros Island We went to bed Thursday and when we woke up Friday we continued exploring Andros Island On Friday my family and I went scuba driving You couldnt even put into words the beautiful sights which lay in the ocean On Friday evening at dinner the event coordinator approached my family and said I hope you are all enjoying your cruise tomorrow night the ship is having a pizza party for all the guests you all are invited I hope you can come That night the boat set sail for the island of Inagua The next day my family kept on exploring and that night we got ready for the party on the ship When we got there it was quiet no one was there Then people started coming in no one was my age no one was even close to my age no one was even close to my parents age All the people there were senior citizens There were 1995 other people on the boat and the only people there were seniors I really wanted to leave but my parents wanted to stay I just sat done should be down still still as a child frighten by a storm then my parents called me over My mom said Stop sitting by yourself come over here They were talking to a group of seniors and they were laughing Laughing Why would anyone be laughing I walked over an old man was telling a joke and guess what It was funny hilarious the funniest joke I have ever heard The jokes continued and they were all funny One
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