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Bridget's feedback:
"This is an interesting proposal; the reader can follow the logic and implications of the writing. It's hard, however, to determine how seriously the reader is meant to take the proposal--and how serious you (or, rather, the rhetor) takes the ideas--is this Swiftian satire?
This confusion is compounded by a lack of sources and context, forcing the discussion to entirely rest on your ethos as the writer and internal logic. The ethos developed across the paper, however, is largely in the voice and mechanical strengths of the writing; this means there is no suggestion of expertise, whether from you as the rhetor or your research and sources (calling into question if any research was, in fact, performed). This hobbles persuasiveness significantly. Another related area is that no context is given for the current cultural norms, an element that would also allow counterargument and response; instead, occasional rhetorical questions are used, and the reader starts to doubt the project.
That being said, this current draft shows control over both higher-order and lower-order concerns. This gives a solid place from which to start thinking about how to move this essay from personal opinion masked by appeals to objectivity into a sophisticated and self-aware piece of writing."
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). My views on sex and attachment. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/my-views-on-sex-and-attachment-y8B4oyK6
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