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There was storm going on outside The thunder was louder then she hadever heard it before She stared aimlessly out the window at the brightflashes of lightning The raindrops hit the window and race down theglass Her expression was almost emotionless As if she was just staringoff into space Yet there was a slight hint of sadness in her face She just sat there and watched the storm as the baristas behind thecounter made drinks for the picky customers that came in for their threepump chai lattes and non fat extra foam cappuccinos The cafe was fullthat day All the tables were full and the music was playing The lightswere low and gave the cafe that calm and quite feeling There was acouple in the corner laughing as they playfully talked about the eventsof the day Another man sat quietly in one of those big comfortablechairs with a book There was a group of young teenage girls gigglingand chatting about the cute barista boy behind the counter This was atypical setting for a mid-class suburban coffee shop Then in the cornersat Julie She didnt seem phased by anything that was going on in thecafe Excuse me miss the barista said Julie didnt moveAgain the barista said Excuse me miss here is your coffee Oh Im sorry Julie responded as she grabbed the black coffee outof the baristas hand She smiled and nodded as the barista walked away Julie sipped on her coffee as she opened up her journal and began towrite down her thoughts as she reflected over the divorce of her parentsand the recent break up of her and her boyfriend As she wrote wordafter word tears began to fill her eyes As she wrote Father whenwill the pain stop a tear hit the page She wiped the tear from thepage and continued writing Hey there Julie was startled by the voice that broke her silenceShe looked up from her journal
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