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Workshop Critique for Jenna Belkin II1 a This paper has good utilization of the MLA format The margins are correct as well as the title and heading It is double-spaced throughout and very clearb With the exception of the cite on page one which needs a space the author is consistent in using proper parenthetical documentation throughout the paperc The works cited page is almost perfect except for a couple small underlining details You dont need to underline the period at the end of a book title and there shouldnt be a space in the underlining of the title Otherwise it looks good2 a There is very good textual support in the paper but a couple more quotes couldnt hurt The quotes used are good support for the authors writing and are nicely b The author primarily uses quotes for support but there are paraphrases as well The references are about a line each c The quote in the middle of page 3 is good but the signal phrase needs to tell the reader why Karen Lindseys opinion is important Also the quote at the top of page 5 3 Most of this paper makes good use of transitions They do a good job of guiding the reader from one idea to the next 4 The conclusion does a good job of wrapping up the paper It repeats the authors main points and finishes with a statement about where we are heading5 This is a very well written paper It makes good use of the MLA format has lots of quotes for evidence and is very readable This paper can be improved by revising it one more time for grammar and spelling and by strengthening the conclusion
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