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"Your essay captures the complex emotions with which children navigate change, and you make good use of detail and description to help the reader understand what these moments were like. I was interested in the decision to keep the final moments firmly in the child's point of view ("she was being mean to me" and "She did three bad things", regarding the mother); I'm curious if your prompt wants you to incorporate some perspective from the present (the position from which the essay starts: "It was this day, 10 years ago..."). While reading, I encountered a number of errors, including what look like typos, that made some of the narrative hard to follow (like "My mom didn't wish me yet"). Make sure to proofread so the reader can experience the storytelling without the distraction of errors and confusion."
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Kibin. (2024). How i felt after my sister was born. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-i-felt-after-my-sister-was-born-yymAT9Wt
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("How I Felt after My Sister Was Born.")
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