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"You have done a good job presenting a variety of perspectives about this issue. You have also supported those perspectives with a significant amount of quality evidence. The intended goal of your essay is confusing and you appear to contradict yourself in the essay. The essay is lacking an introduction which would be where you could clarify what your paper is going to be about. I the middle of the essay you state that you are an advocate for pro-choice, but at the end of the essay you say that you think abortion is bad except in extreme cases. These statements feel contradictory as written. I know you go on to further explain the idea of being pro-choice under specific circumstances, but this should be made more clear in both of the above circumstances. There are a large number of grammar and sentence structure errors that are making the essay harder to read and need to be resolved. There are also a number of formatting errors. The citations that you have included in the essay are not properly formatted and there are a lot of facts that seem to need citations. Make sure that all information that you obtained from another source is cited to avoid plagiarism issues. Last, there are terms that you consistently use that you have not defined so the use of them is confusing to the reader. An example of this is FLO. "
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). An argument in favor of the pro choice movement among women. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/an-argument-in-favor-of-pro-choice-amongst-women-VepK34PF
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"An Argument in Favor of the Pro Choice Movement Among Women." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/an-argument-in-favor-of-pro-choice-amongst-women-VepK34PF
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1. "An Argument in Favor of the Pro Choice Movement Among Women." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/an-argument-in-favor-of-pro-choice-amongst-women-VepK34PF.
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