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I heard about you deciding to add a class to the schedule next year I also heard that you wanted student suggestions and I think that I have a very good suggestion I would like to see a study hall added to the schedule next year My reasons for wanting this class added are grades for a majority of students would go up it would give us time to do make-up work or homework we might not have time for after school and it would also encourage students to try harder in schoolFirst if we had a study hall added to our schedules then I think that a majority of our classs grades would improve If we had a class in school with free time to do our studying it would definitely help My cousin Lacy used to never study for anything but now since she has a study hall period her grades have gone from low Bs and high Cs to high As and Bs 45 of my cousins classmates grades have improved also Did you ever study outside of school if you could find a way to avoid it Well a lot of students here try to find anything for an excuse but if we had a study hall period then they wouldnt have an excuseFurthermore a lot of students dont have very much time after school to do their homework or make-up work because of after school jobs and sports Did you participate in after school activities when you were in high school If so did you have time for all of your homework I play sports after school and I also baby-sit young children after school therefore I am not able to do my homework until nine or ten oclock If I had a class to do it in at school it would definitely get done and my grades would improve At least 15 of the students in all of my
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