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Victoria is a very adventurous young girl One day she went to go adventure in the forest behind her house As she was walking something started to shine brightly in her eyes She bent down to pick it up and then she began to shrink She got as small as an ant Victoria started to panic Mommy please find me and help me but no one could hear her She started crying and saying please someone anybody help After about thirty minutes of her crying and yelling for help the ground starts shaking beneath her Then she hears something Boom Boom Boom Just then she sees a large foot behind the tree She looks up to see who this is and its a young boy She starts yelling for help Help me Please But he couldnt hear her So she just throws herself on to the tree to sit down What will I do now Then Victoria heard a yell She runs to see what it is Then she hears crying so she follows the sound Once shes close to where the sound came from she hid behind a tree She saw that it was the young boy that had passed by He had shrunken down to her size now too He was crying and saying Mom Dad please Come find meVictoria stared to move a little closer to hear but the little boy heard her move In panic he yelled Whos there Victoria came up from behind the tree and said Hi Im Victoria Benson Then the little boy introduced himself Im Benny Fitz They sat down next to each other and talked for a while They started talking about how they were just walking through the forest and saw the pin and when the picked it up they shrunk Then Benny said Maybe if we pick up the pin again we will be normal size So they went to were the pin was
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