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Im driving along a deserted road deserted and dusty In my four wheel drive old and rusty All I see for miles on end Is an infinite expanse of desert and sand My dog is panting with his head out of the window And his tongue flapping around in the wind All I see in the horizons eye A little town With my stomach a- rumble and my lips a-dry I drive slowly through the town No-one to be seen I feel I am alone and down I step into an old dirty bar Ten pairs of eyes follow me around As if I am an infamous criminal or an unwanted animal I take a seat and sigh with relief After my long exhausting journey beyond belief I order a beer and eye up the crowd I start my story but not too loud I tell them stories of adventures in the land And soon I have them eating from the palm of my hand I show them photos of the Australian coast I wager all they think I do is boast I cut to the chase and ask them a question Ive surfed all around the beaches of Australia and every ocean And Im getting a little bit bored The same old sand the same old blue Im wanting something new They lift their eye brows and look around They probably think I am a penny short of a pound I go on with my reason to appear I hear the surfing is just fine around here So please can you tell me where the surf is to be found They stare then laugh and then roll around And then one finally answers me You must be stupid you cannot see Theres nothing but sand for ever around ere So I says Ill find it dont you fear And I up and I leave and I grab my best
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