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Applying Cultural Awareness to Interpret the Global Market for Condom Sales

This healthcare essay examines differing responses to AIDS to consider how best to reach target demographics in contraceptive sales, with an emphasis on culture and politics. The student takes a look at Brazil, India, and the U.S. to make recommendations for how the London International Group might globalize their market for the Avanti Durex.
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Bridget's feedback:

"Your essay shows impressive control of each part of this discussion, moving clearly and efficiently within the sections to build up the case. The writing itself is lucid and mechanically sound, and sentence variety and excellent control of diction create dynamism and readability. I spot two main areas to work with as you move forward. First, and perhaps depending on the project parameters, a lack of citations or reference to sources disrupt ethos and make it hard for the reader to assess broad claims about groups' behaviors beyond stereotype. By directly incorporating your evidence into the text via parenthetical citation, footnotes, etc., the reader can follow the discussion with more confidence. Second, the purpose of this writeup is a little hard to determine from the introduction, which ostensibly sets up a compare-contrast between Brazil and India; later discussion of America and the London International Group should be signposted in the introduction for better reader comprehension."

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