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Appearance is everything well these days you have heard and live it There is nothing wrong with this philosophy except the fact that a whole country is becoming obsessed with their looks Americans are too concerned with their looks If someone does not look good the person inside does not matter and that has clouded our judgment on how we see people America home of the Brave still falls victim to weight loss programs designer clothes and cosmetic surgeryNot too long ago I went to my seventy year old uncles party only to learn something very sad my little cousin is very sick After the party started my thirteen year old cousin Esther was sitting in a corner by herself like the Statue of Liberty As I Walked toward her with a plate full of food her stomach growledwhat are you sitting here by yourself and not eating I asked lowering myself to the floor beside her Im too fat for a thirteen year old She answered with a matter of fact tone So what does that mean I shrugged confused I have stopped eating regularly months ago I throw food away when my mom is not looking I make myself throw up if I feel like Ive eaten too much and during lunch I exercise in the gym like they do in the show she jumped to her feet lightly like a butterfly with no wings then she fell on the floor face down and unable to get up Immediately people ran to her side without another thought I ran to the phone and called an ambulance They took Esther to the hospital where the doctor explained later on that her body was in shut down because her body uses its fat The worst part about all this was she was diagnosed with anorexia Lying in the hospital bed with tears running down her face she
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