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As a child I could not have asked for a better childhood I am aseventeen year old girl and I love my parents more than I did when I wasa baby They are two of the funniest people and yet they know how tobalance their jobs as parents and work I was 3 years old when my momput a set of ballet slippers and tutu on me I have never felt morebeautiful than I did at that moment Ever since I could talk I have been taking ballet classes every Fridayand Saturday from 5 to 7 my dream was to dance across the biggest stagein the world and doing what I loved to do As cliche as it may soundbut I wake up with a song in my head every morning ballet nourished mysoul At the end of my freshman year I hit a dark spot in my lifeThings went wrong and I made mistakes that tore the trust my parents hadin me Thats where ballet picked me back up again and made me realizethat through every dark night theres a bright day after that WhenIm doing ballet I feel a sense of self-confidence and calmness when Iface pressure whether it is with school or my personal life Just 5 years I was practicing my routine landed a jump and heard a popin my knee and fell to the floor The pain was excruciating I was notable to stand up and had to be rushed to the hospital I tore my ACLIve sprained ankles had a broken leg 3 times and was always able toget back from it But this this was different After surgery I had towait about 5-6 months until I can go back to rehearsal That was when myparents intervened because they did not want to see me get hurt anymoreThey understood how much I loved ballet but I also understood how muchthey loved me Its been five years since I
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