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A wise woman once said An athlete with a winners attitude makes commitments a loser makes promises This is one of the most important lessons I have learned A very remarkable person taught it to me A woman to whom I owe a lot Someone I look up to and admire greatly This wise woman that has changed my life for the better is Mrs Heidi Balicki my Varsity Volleyball Coach Over the last two years I have gotten to know her as both a coach and a friend Her philosophy of always working hard and having the attitude of a winner is something that will always stay with me She once told me that I had the attitude and mental strength of a winner I have always kept her kind words close to my heart Throughout my volleyball seasons her words have impacted me immensely and helped me to get through many difficult timesNot only did her words affect me but her personality also left its mark by influencing and changing my life I can see the shock in your eyes right now You are probably thinking Is it realistic to say that a mere high school volleyball coach could have that great of an impact on her athletes The sarcasm in your voice is very clear to me But its true Balicki did in fact change my life and make me a better person How you ask Well it is impossible to answer that simple one word question with a simple answer So Ill say just this Mrs Balicki gave her all to help me succeed and in the end she made me a remarkable athlete and a better all-around person She succeeded not only in her duties as a coach but also in her loyalty as a friend When she first took over the position of varsity volleyball coach her words meant very little to me For I was a stubborn snobby
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