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The Advantages of xDSL for Faster Internet Connections

This paper discusses the need for bandwidth when accessing the World Wide Web, and means of increasing it.
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Jim's feedback:

"It might aid clarity to write “ones and zeros.” Note that “then” should be “than” in the second paragraph, and “high speed” should be hyphenated when used as a modifier. Sometimes there is no space between sentences. With the exception of degrees and percentages, a space should precede units. It would be more accurate to write “reflects” and not “complements” near the top of page 2. Following that is a comma splice, i.e., the use of a comma to separate what should be two sentences. This paper is informative, but it would benefit by organizing it into sections with titles. One paragraph is quite long, which can be hard to follow. The paper has an introduction, but no conclusion. The last sentence is truncated."

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