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In this essayBartholomae discuss theproblems a new student face when he has to write on his ownHe writes that a student needs to workwithin the instructions and formats of the universitywhich sometimes limit hiscreativity and freedom in writingHe believes that students try to write to get marks in the waythey are told instead of being freely creative and using their own ideasIt is clearly shown thatone has to get out of their comfort zone and have to interact and adapt new people and newcircumstancestherefore everyone has to invent the university According to Bartholomaenewwriters need to write their own ideas as a first step in writing instead of writing in the codes ofacademic disciplines He cited the example of clay modelpage150 where a student tries to impress the university faculty in his essayHe emphasis that in thisessaystudent takes different roles as a companion researcher and also that of a teacherHe istalking about the struggle to become a writer in the eyes of universityAlthough examples prove theirpoints but they are too long and vocabulary is not easy to understand for a new studentHe didnot want to write that students cant write good enoughbut he argues that no student can becompared with the professorsThere is no right or wrong wayBut I think if there isnothing right or wrong and no comparisons then one cannot realize their mistakesso growth inlearning process will not take placeSodefinitely guidelines are necessary to
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