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DREAM HOUSE It was a dream come true After renting apartment after apartment and cleaning everyones mess each time Laura and Michael finally bought their first house While searching in a quiet neighborhood they found a perfect little house They had saved enough money to buy a small cottage Laura and Michael were married with no children When they moved Michael was very busy at work and did not have a lot of free time to help his wife around the house On the other hand Laura was an author and her home was her office She was the one who had to clean and paint the house All that was left was the attic Laura was amazed that the former owners had left so many things behind She sorted out things that needed to be thrown away and things that might have a certain value She found this beautiful family portrait and decided to keep it in her office Laura and Michael were very happy with their beautiful new house Every day Michael was anxious to come home Suddenly one afternoon Michael found Laura sitting on the porch looking strange He asked her what was wrong and she could not answer A couple of days later Michael came home and couldnt find Laura He searched the house calling her name and he finally found her in the attic Again he questioned her and she still couldnt answer This strange change in her personality worried Michael He found that as time went by Laura was acting very weird He decided to take her to a doctor who recommended that Laura be hospitalized for some tests After a few days the doctor told Michael that Laura was fine and that she suffered from temporary memory loss Laura and Michael left the hospital knowing that there wasnt much that they could do The next day Michael returned to work with
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