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Driving through the dessert can be wearisome fatiguing and all the things that you dread in a long drive Not this trip it was the new beginning I was on my way to find myself I had 14 hours to contemplate the reasons I was doing this My friends said I was nuts family said I was stupid Lets see nuts and stupid um OK I guess everyone has their own opinion Its not really what I wanted to hear but I could see their point Yuma Arizona my hometown lived there for 10 years graduated from high school had lots of friends had a great job but one crucial element was missing I just wasnt happy there Everyone including my family who by the way all moved back south said I had everything going for me I on the other hand did not feel that way There were hundreds of reasons why I should have stayed carried on but it only took a few significant reasons to abandon my so called perfect life in Yuma Arizona I remember driving looking out of the window at the mountains and clay colored rocks I realized just how beautiful it all was Again my thoughts turned back to my life The man I thought I would end up sharing my so-called perfect life with I could see his face remember his smile hear him laugh Jim and I were great friends for a long while Almost a whole year until I began to actually feel something stronger I had never been in love before and it had been an overwhelming feeling At a party I had too much to drink and on the way home blurted out how I had felt He smiled and drove me home The next day he came by my house and sat me down and told me he had felt the same way It began Two wonderful years of
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