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Earlier Days When My Sister Was Born It was this day 10 years ago when my sister was born We were in India Everyone was happy and so was I It is indeed very hard to remember but I still have stored this memory in my mind like remembering my own birthday party When my dad and mom brought the baby girl home from the hospital everyone was much excited to see her My uncle was taking video of this important and exciting moment They all gathered around my dad because the baby was in his arms I could hear the voices that my relatives made I heard awwww the baby is so cute She looks like her mom I wanted to see her too But I was too short Everyone was around my dad so I couldnt even see my dad As I was running around my dad I was squashed in between everyones legs My mom saw me and she picked to me up When I saw the baby she was very cute Even better than my baby pictures I didnt feel good about it I was very jealous when everyone said that she was cuter than me and even better than me I loved me cradling bed very much Even my mom knew that I would never like if she gave the bed away or even if she let anyone use it But when I entered in my moms room what I saw was that baby was in my cradling bed The one that use to be mine was no longer called mine With out even saying anything I left the room Most of my relatives were at my house Its our Indian tradition that usually most of my dads sides relatives that are my dads brothers and sisters stay at our house when the baby is born They stay there for a week or two My dads two
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