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When I began to prepare this paper I tried to think of a subject I feel strongly about one my readers could ALL feel strongly about I want to talk to you about something everyone does may be required to do and INDEED Should GREATLY DESIRE to doand that is to show up If you think the GREATLY DESIRE is a little too strong withhold judgment till Im done and maybe youll agree with me that its not We all begin our showing up very early in life In fact our first showing up involves our moms and dads and a funny looking bird called a stork For a very brief time after our initial showing up we are THE absolute center of attentionbut that doesnt last nearly long enough Pretty soon were expected to show up for schoolevery day every day every dayand remember how hard you thought that was A recent study in the Cincinnati school district revealed that students NOT showing up was costing the district in excess of 3 million dollars per year so the schools there began handing out video games DVDs even bicycles and computers to kids with perfect attendance All through our school years were begged threatened cajoled and rewarded just for showing up thereand many of us still fight it all the way After the school years theres work and the militarynow I dont need to tell anyone how serious the military is about wanting you to show upas a matter of fact the consequences of NOT showing up can be as mild as a chewing out or as severe as a firing squad In the workplace showing up is a valuable trait greatly sought by employers A recent Canadian study reported that 23 of all workers call out at least once a year 1 in five misses a week or more and 13 of these workers miss in
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