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Growing up in the streets of Los Angeles one will be caught into the temptations that are out there One of the biggest temptations being caught into gangs It is pretty hard not joining one especially when you see all your friends joining a certain crew or gang This temptations are brought upon you during your junior high years when everyone wants to fit in and find all the friends on can find Fortunately for me a incident occur that would change my life foreverIt was a hot summer day in September just two days before my birthday I was only twelve years old I was just a little kid not even in my teens A couple of friends decided that after school we were just going to hang out in front of my building It was five of us and we were just sitting and watching the girls come out of school from a near by high school The friends that I was hanging out with were newly friendship that I had come into We were hanging out and whistling at girls and making jokes After a while we saw a blue Ford Mustang pass by We didnt pay much attention to it We figured that there wasnt anything to worry about Then it passed a second time and as I turned and looked at the car my friend just to the left threw out a gang sign with his hands Since I wasnt looking at him I didnt see him throw the sign outA couple of hours passed by and my friend brought up an interesting conversation He mentioned that I should join a little crew that he had recently joined the funny part being that I was stupid enough to give it a lot of thinking into it He was giving me a lot of lies on how if you join that you would have a lot of friends and people would
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