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What happened my cousin screamed at me as she came running out the door While she was yelling at me as I sat there and wondered to myself those same words Those were the thoughts and words that ran to my head and were said to me one Saturday afternoon when I wrecked my uncles car into my deck at my old houseI was 11 years old entering the 4th grade All I wanted to do was play kickball It was nagging at me like a sore tooth My parents were out to dinner with my uncle and my cousin was baby sitting me Back then all I ever did was play kickball I played with the kids in my neighborhood and we would have tournaments So that day I had invited a bunch of guys over to play They were all coming over in about a half hour so I had to get everything ready First I got the ball and bases and put then out After I was done o looked over and realized the car It was sitting in the driveway right in the middle of where the action would have taken place My first reaction was oh no we will not be able to play Then I looked inside of the car and I saw the keys just laying on the seat like they were saying use me please so you can wreck the carSo that was my solution Except one thing I didnt know how to drive and it was a stick shift Those were some pretty big problems too So I ran inside to ask my cousin if she could move it but that turned out to be a big no That didnt stop me though There was a kid I knew in the house behind mine who was older than me so I thought I would try him He was about 15 at the time and he was
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