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It was a clear morning too early for the birds to be awake and the party was winding down It was the dawn of a new year of a new millennium Empty bottles and cans were scattered all over the dining room and all throughout the swimming pool area Spirits were high except in the Sambuca bottles that lay empty on the table The party had been a long one longer still because it was a very special occasion It looked exactly like the opening scene to a TAC advertisement however back then I didnt really care about that I was having a good time I was surrounded by people older than me all of them the legal drinking and driving age I was fourteen and I respected my parents wishes and only drank the obligatory glass of celebratory Champagne when the hour came One of the young men for the sake of his privacy I will call him David was an aspiring footballer He played Australian Rules football for his local team and was this year selected to play for one of the leading VFL teams His best friend John played with David in the local team however had just missed out on selection At the conclusion of the party John told David that he was going to drive because he thought that David had drunk too much and as he staggered out the door I can remember myself thinking that they should just take a taxi maybe if I said something at the time nothing would have happened David walked with about the same amount of grace as John down to the front nature-strip as John bought the car around from down the road I was still inside when it ensued I assumed the screech of tires was just some drunken idiot playing around with his car hell these guys loved doing burnouts even when they werent drunk The thud
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