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Throughout the 17 years I have been on this earth I have encountered many amazing friends each of whom has influenced me in some way The friend whom I love and cherish most though is not even a human being but a horse I call him Teddy Bear or Teddy for short Before I had him I owned a number of other horses each very special but as difficult as it is to admit Teddy is my favorite I saw Teddy for the first time two months ago A young boy brought him over from the Netherlands but had grown too tall and was forced to sell him Teddy arrived at my barn before anyone even knew he was for sale Although I was not in the market for a new horse my trainer immediately recognized his incredible potential and after long negotiations Teddy became mine I knew then that I finally had a horse capable of helping me achieve my dreams in the show ring but I didnt know I was about to gain the best friend ever In Teddy I found a selfless respectful vivacious personality who has taught me more than I could ever learn from a human He has taught me self-reliance love dedication and compassion It is in this horse that my personality and hard work shine through The bond between horse and rider is stronger than you might imagine Horses possess the ability to sense whatever the rider is feeling and it affects their feelings too Due partially to Teddys personality I initially found it difficult to have this kind of relationship with him He has a very distinct personality one that makes me laugh regularly As far as Teddy is concerned he is a king to be treated like royalty Therefore when he first became mine he was not particularly sentimental and I found it hard to connect with him Fortunately once I recognized his
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