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My friend once told me life is like a book each page has a new content This quote pertains to my adventurous 17 years of life Throughout these adventurous 17 years there were many times when I had to make my own decisions Some of those decisions were morally correct while others were followed by negative consequences Yet there was a time when it took me three years to conceive if my decision was right or wrong After I analyzed my decision I learned something very important Things will come and go but a family and an education will always remainIt all began three years ago when I was a freshman in high school Since I am an extroverted girl I meet new people everywhere I go I was at Great America with a couple of friends back in 1997 We were standing by the Demon and I noticed a group of guys waving at me Soon after they approached me we held a 2-hour conversation From that day on I became close friends with all of them except one of the guys We became more than friends From freshman year through the end of my junior year we went out At that time he was all that mattered As he became my first priority family and school were put aside At home things took a 180-degree turn I ignored my parents which led to losing their trust comfort and compassion School got worse day by day Having a boyfriend made it hard for me to concentrate on my school and family life Soon enough my grades fell Another reason was that during 2 months of sophomore year I was in the hospital Besides the effect of being in the hospital had on school it affected my view on life On January 21st of that year I was admitted to the hospital for an urgent surgery My appendix had ruptured and I was in a
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