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It stuck out like a sore thumb bleeding with fluorescent pink I had never seen another like it It was used as a marker when people stopped to ask for directions It was like a lighthouse in a sea of homes It was never referred to as anything but the pink house Our neighborhood wasnt very wealthy In fact Id say it was only about a half a step up from a trailer park The streets were lined with little one-story cottages and then just around the corner there it was the pink house It must have been at least twenty times larger than all the other houses on its block combined The dogs house and playpen were almost equivalent to the size of the next home Starting from the mailbox there was a pathway shaped in a figure eight we called the yellow brick road It led around the dog through all the gardens and followed the perimeter of the brook until it reached near the garage door and loops back around to enclose the pool The landscape was manicured three times a week and there was never a bare spot in the grass The front entrance was a huge set of double doors A great American Condors wingspan couldnt cover it To each side of them spaced about twenty feet away were gargantuan pillars as thick as mature redwood trees I walked through those fortress doors once I was selling candy bars for a school fundraiser and they bought the whole box The people were nice but I paid no attention to them I just starred at the houses beautiful interior The cathedral ceiling could have been painted by Da Vinci himself The TV room
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