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The Moving Outcome The air is humid and sticky as my mother sister and I lie on the floor of our new dinning room in our newly built house It is August and outside bellows with sounds of life Frogs croaking throughout the shore of the lake crickets chirping about the grassy plain are much different than we are accustomed to This is our first week living in our new house on Crystal Lake in Oconomowoc Wisconsin The house inhabits along side a 17-acre lake and a large grassy plain on Crystal Lake in Oconomowoc Wisconsin In Wauwatosa we fall asleep to sirens and traffic noises but zero nature resonance like our new house The house is a burnt brown with both a large and a small deck in the back facing the beautiful lake that turns ocean blue near the end of summer An enclosed deck is located below the large deck which holds our hot tub that is comfortable in the winter Our old house now occupies my father at least until we move our belongings is located in Wauwatosa Wisconsin The move is a major change for my entire family My father at one time never gives moving a thought but my mother Martha always has her way of persuading We cannot and will not move because of the business my father Mark complains I dont care where it is if it is further away it will be harder for me to manage My mother despises schooling in Wauwatosa because the schools are behind in education and flunking kindergarten that year does not help When she finds time between raising two kids and working nights as a nurse she studies all school districts not far from Milwaukee After searching for several weeks Martha falls in love with Hartland and Oconomowoc In spite of that she finds Arrowhead is far too prestigious for our family After visiting the City of
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