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The Paschal Mystery in Christianity

This paper discusses the paschal mystery and other aspects of faith.
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Jim's feedback:

"You should start with an article, “the paschal mystery,” and note that the term is not capitalized. Also, you write the term (and also “lent”) both capitalized and not. As a writer, you need to practice consistency. The plural of “Christian” is “Christians,” with no apostrophe. You should write “too much” and not “to much.” It is good practice to avoid informal expressions such as “a lot.” Avoid capitalizing common nouns (“organization”). As a modifier, “clean up” should be hyphenated. Note the misspelling of “of” as “f.” You tend to use a superfluous comma or semicolon. For example, on the last page, we see this on the first line of the large paragraph, and again in the second sentence under item 7. This is an interesting essay, but it should have an introduction and conclusion. Overall, you should strive for concision."

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