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Leilani Torres Duo Mrs Maxon Essay 4900 The Change of a Lifetime To choose one event in ones life that was an important changing event is extremely difficult For ones life always has many important changing events I know in my life I have experienced many important changing events but to choose one is fairly easy for me The reason for this is because the changing event in my life has stayed within me every minute and hour of my everyday In the beginning of ones life parents are all one has For me it was different I only had one parent my dad I looked up to my dad as someone I could trust and share feelings with but never the feeling of fear I always knew deep inside my heart that it was never my fault that I never did anything so wrong to deserve what I received for seven years Since I was seven until I was fourteen years old I was abused physically by my own father that I trusted and looked up to I could never understand why the little things I did could make him so angry until now My dad was always stressed about his job and financial problems He also had a controlling problem not just with me but with whole family I knew if I even made a simple mistake on my homework like a coma I would be punished physically One day my father decided to check on how I was doing in school He found out I was missing a large amount of homework and my grades were failing When he got home he was furious and that is when I received the worst beating of my life When the beating over I cleaned the blood from the floor and my face and went to bed In the morning I knew when he would return from work I would
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