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Good night mom and dad Ill see you in the morning and Im really sorry Michael said as he trudged up the stairs It was just a couple days before Christmas and ever since Michael and Ben had gotten out of school for Christmas break Ben had spent every night out with his friends I always have to be home by 1000 no matter what Its not fair Im 15 years old Im not a child anymore and I think I can take care of myself Just because Ben is seventeen he thinks he can do anything Why are things so unfair Michael thought to himself as he got ready for bed As he lay in bed that night so many thoughts went through his mind It didnt seem like I had as many gifts under the tree as Ben did tonight Michael thought he gets to do everything and I dont get to do anything ever Michael could not get any sleep that night because he could not stop thinking about how awful his life was It seemed that he had nothing that he could call his own As Michael dwelt on how his parents must love Ben more his feelings of self-pity slowly turned into hatred for his brother Michael finally fell asleep He had an awful dream that night He had dreamt that it was Christmas morning He was so excited as he jumped out of bed and ran downstairs excitedly but when he reached the bottom of the stairs his entire family was sitting in the kitchen crying His mom dad grandparents and aunts and uncles were all sitting around the dining table crying Michael also saw himself just sitting there He was not crying he seemed to be staring at something no one else could see Michael tried to get his own attention but failed He didnt know what was wrong and it seemed as if no one could even
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