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Persuasive Essay Driving is a tremendous responsibility I believe our state should have rigorous driving tests to make the roads safe for others However I think most teenagers arent ready to accept these responsibilities I think the minimum driving age for Florida should be eighteen This is because many student go to parties and get intoxicated as a result The school also provides a safe system of transportation and some teenagers think they are immortalWhen many teenagers go to parties they might be pressured to do things they might not normally do Drinking alcohol is one example of this Once you are under the influence of alcohol your abilities to drive deteriorate In this state you hurt yourself or even worse you might injure someone else Many teen deaths result each year from intoxicated driving Driving your own car to school is not a absolutely necessary This creates more risks and more possibilities for a teenager to become involved in an accident The county provides a entirely safe bussing program Students can be picked up in the morning then returned home in the afternoon I think more student should take advantage of thisWhen you are a teenager it is said you feel immortal This may hold true in some instances Students might approach a stoplight and decide to race the engine when next to another classmate Or races might ensue that endanger the student and the other citizens on the roadsThis is not to say that im really excited about receiving my license I think that I will be able to stay safe and not endanger others on the road Some people just arent ready though So for the well being of everyone I believe the driving age should be pushed back to age eighteen At which the student are more ready to accept their new found responsibilites
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