1. Home

An Analysis of the Economic Trends since 1996 and the Effects of Oil Prices in the United States of America

This essay is about the performance of the U.S. economy. The author highlights aspects that affect the economy the most such as employment and inflation.
PAGES
3
WORDS
1,546
  Cite
View Full Essay
About this essay
This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

More essays like this:

Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
Exactly what I needed.
- Jenna Kraig, student @ UCLA
Wow. Most helpful essay resource ever!
- Chris Stochs, student @ UC Berkeley
Generating Preview...
This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

More essays like this:

Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
Exactly what I needed.
- Jenna Kraig, student @ UCLA
Wow. Most helpful essay resource ever!
- Chris Stochs, student @ UC Berkeley

View other essays like this one:

Jenn's feedback:

"Your paper is very well-formatted, an essential aspect of writing for cohesion and comprehension. To further increase reading comprehension, I recommend that you break your large chunks of text into paragraphs. You have also done a reasonably good job with writing conventions, with only a few grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure mistakes that you must resolve. The content of your paper is off to an excellent start, with a significant number of cited facts used to support the points you are trying to make. I suggest you make sure you create smooth transitions between new ideas to create relationships and improve cohesion. The aspect of the paper that needs the most work is its organization. As it is written, it does not include an introduction or conclusion. An introduction should consist of background information about this paper's topic, along with a thesis statement that communicates the specific aspects of the subject that will be covered and why. The conclusion should summarize the main points made in the body of the paper and relate them to the thesis statement. Including an introduction and conclusion will round off the paper, make it clear what the purpose of the paper is, and show the reader that you are focused on the topic throughout your writing."

Learn more about this feedback