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Genetically Modified Foods, Safety, and the Environment

This essay presents both sides of the debate on genetically modified foods, and makes recommendations for their marketing and use.
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Jim's feedback:

"You ask an interesting question. You should define the term before you ask about it, i.e., switch your first and second sentences. You can write more economically. For example, you could say, "Genetically modified foods have advantages and disadvantages on both the environment and society." Absent other guidance, you can write "1500" instead of spelling it out. Write numerals through nine, and if you spell out 37, you should write "thirty seven," without a hyphen. Your sentence on page 2 ("The EPA's review ...") is confusing and it mixes tenses. Note how we spell "Nestlé." Some quick research seems to indicate that the product you call "Nestle Quick" has been known as "Nesquick" since 1999. Your statement, "Which shows they are doing tests," is not a complete sentence, and I am unsure what point you intend to make. It may seem dramatic that attributes of scorpions and corn become intertwined, but these specifics have no bearing on the argument. You make various other assertions based on scant evidence. This is a complex, emotionally-charged topic. It is good to present all sides, but you should focus on facts and not assertions."

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