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Environmental Issues in the Modern World

This essay discusses environmental issues and possible solutions.
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Jim's feedback:

"Write economically. You say the environment faces many problems, and in the same sentence, you refer to “the problems that we face.” You could instead write, “Our environment faces many problems …, which are becoming more and more evident.” The “population of people” is the “population.” Write out small numbers such as “third.” You finish your introduction with a comma splice, i.e., the use of a comma to link what should be two sentences. The verb in “there is more people” should be “are.”

Your writing is hard to understand at times. Run a grammar checker to identify issues, and consider how to say things more clearly.

You identify issues of concern, but you do not look at the big picture. The issues you raise are not simple. You need to consider all the factors and cite the literature to support your views."

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