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Causes of Unrest in France That Would Lead to Revolution

This essay gives a brief account of the events leading to the French Revolution, from the institution of unfair tax structures to the drafting of a new constitution in 1790.
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Bob's feedback:

"You've assembled some useful material for a good paper. You'll want to organize it in a way that clearly lays out your purpose and explains the events in a way a layperson could understand.

Your paper starts off discussing the division of estates without offering any context. You'll want to give your reader an idea of time and place with an introduction paragraph. Imagine that your reader has no prior knowledge about the period you're writing about and think about what critical information they'll need to be able to understand your essay.

In places, the tone of the paper feels informal, and some details, such as the deaths of some of the women who marched on Versailles, are mentioned in such an offhand way as to seem unimportant.

Aside from style issues, writing conventions are in pretty good shape, but always make sure to proofread to correct occasional errors."

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