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It all began one day when I was over my friend Susans house Her parents had just left for vacation to Texas leaving her home by herself I was allowed to stay that weekend while her parents were away Susan and I were sitting down eating when she got a call from the house where a new family just moved into The Smiths had asked her to babysit for them They said it was all right if I came too They wanted us to come over about six that evening When we got over there Mrs Smith introduced her two year old daughter named Julie to us Mr and Mrs Smith didnt leave right away because they wanted Julie to get to know us better Mrs Smith told Susan and I that Julie could stay up until 800 PM She also told us she had been having problems with her telephone There must have been something wrong with the connection because when it rang there would be no one on the other end Someone was coming tomorrow to take a look at it Mr and Mrs Smith informed us that they would be a little late coming home because it was their anniversary and they had a long night planned We told them to have a nice time and they both grabbed their coats and left Julie started crying just as they closed the door We gave her a bottle and put her down to watch some TV Then the phone rang and Susan and I looked at each other seeing who was going to answer it I answered the phone but no one was there I said hello again but still no answer All I could hear was someone breathing heavily It was loud gasping and very frightening I said hello again and heard a faint masculine voice As I began to
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