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"I can tell that you've given the topic some thought, and you're off to a good start. I think, however, that your essay would benefit from a strong introduction that would tell the reader what to expect, and a strong conclusion summarizing that you accomplished what you set out to do. Additionally, although you declare the Bible passages in your first sentence, it might actually be nice to integrate them to be more aligned with the quotes they refer to as footnotes ("Let there be light," and the discrepancy in the why God created the world and rested vs. created man/woman, for example would benefit from a direct citation.) There are a variety of errors in spelling and grammar included, so make sure you get a thorough edit/proofread before turning it in to avoid marks off for those. Finally, make sure to check your spacing as there are some extra spaces throughout. "
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