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The Biblical Angel and Its Role in Christian Tradition

This informative paper introduces the reader to the figure of the angel in Christian tradition. Written from an Christian apologetics perspective, the student explores the role of angels in various translations of the Bible and in modern popular religious landscape.
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Bridget's feedback:

"You do a great job keeping the discussion lively across the myriad details. Narrative flow and sentence variety create a dynamic reading experience, but I do question the effectiveness of some of the more casual language (bust out of jail, jump ship, rounded up). You directly address your audience a few times, so take a moment to define who that audience is, and then think about if you have pitched all diction toward that target from a rhetorical standpoint. Similarly, make sure your references are consistently stylized for your reader; you may also want to provide more specific names of translations to help the reader follow the various versions you mention, and I urge you to provide information on your other sources that give some of the background information, as well.

You have a lot of ground to cover here, and you keep things moving; the organization largely reflects that, and the use of headings helps guide the reader; you might even consider subheadings, as well. I noticed that the Archangel paragraph is quite long, which may overwhelm the reader: again, subheadings or further paragraphing will help curate the reading experience.

Finally, the paper ends rather abruptly. A final concluding paragraph will help communicate the paper's purpose and the main takeaways for your reader."

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