How Technology, Innovation, and Necessity Drove the History of Naval Aviation

This essay tracks the development of naval aviation as a response to innovation and world events, especially the Pacific War and the "revolt of the admirals." The student argues that maintaining the strength and power of the U.S. Navy depends on a state-of-the-art aviation force.

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"The decision to organize the discussion chronologically is a good call, helping the reader trace the development that forms the central narrative and theme of your essay. By defining the key ideas of growth over time (first sentence), you let the reader know right away what to expect. Regarding that first sentence, however, I want to check in on how it's written, as "one can see a growing force" is not immediately clear because "force" is used both to mean power and an actual body in the essay. Another moment that should be clarified is the early mention of the "revolt of the admirals" via a timestamp--e.g., "the postwar 'revolt...'", "the 'revolt...' in the late 1940s...", or whatever dating best reflects common usage in the literature. I recommend reviewing the essay in its entirety for other moments that can be refined in the interest of clarity and precision. Similar detail-oriented work should be done to catch typos or occasional errors, as well as awkward phrasing or syntax."

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(Kibin, 2024)

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Kibin. (2024). How technology, innovation, and necessity drove the history of naval aviation. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-technology-innovation-and-necessity-drove-the-history-of-naval-aviation-s9mxwhIJ

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("How Technology, Innovation, and Necessity Drove the History of Naval Aviation.")

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"How Technology, Innovation, and Necessity Drove the History of Naval Aviation." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-technology-innovation-and-necessity-drove-the-history-of-naval-aviation-s9mxwhIJ

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"How Technology, Innovation, and Necessity Drove the History of Naval Aviation." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-technology-innovation-and-necessity-drove-the-history-of-naval-aviation-s9mxwhIJ.