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An Analysis of the JCSS System and Performance Management

This is an analysis of the process of a school district selecting vendors and implementing new software. The author was asked to evaluate the process, assess the implementation of the student management system, and critique the school district's performance when purchasing the system.
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"I have very few recommendations to make regarding changing your paper. Since it is in a question-and-answer format, the purpose of your writing is clear. It is apparent that you stay focused on that purpose, the organization of your paper is perfect, and the formatting is exceptional. All of these aspects of writing are essential for cohesiveness and reading comprehension. The only recommendation I have regarding content is to consider providing more detail in some places, so it is more evident to the reader what the circumstances are and what leads to certain things happening. Moving on to conventions, there are a minor amount of grammar, word choice, and punctuation errors scattered throughout the essay. Consider doing a read-through or having another pair of eyes look at your paper and provide you with specific feedback regarding these issues. This paper discusses whether birth order affects who we are. The author discusses the opinions of Freud and Adler and describes the characteristics of people by birth order."

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