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A letter that seemed to heal I stared into Joeys tear-filled eyes We sat on the cold cement of my driveway and a soft wind blew my long hair across my emotionless face The love of my life had cheated on me I was so hurt but would not let Joey know As he poured his heart out to me my facial expressions remained cold I could not believe that the one who I trusted more than anything in the world had betrayed me in a state of drunken disillusionment After Joey confessed his betrayal to me he wrote me two letters begging for forgiveness These letters have affected me in so many ways I have read them at least a thousand times The letters did not make Joeys actions right but they did make me feel better about myself The letters also helped us overcome this obstacle in our relationship and grow stronger in our love and our trust It was just like any other day I went to school then met my two friends at a coffee shop They told me that they had to tell me something and that it was the hardest thing that they had ever had to tell someone They told me that Joey had been with his ex-girlfriend this weekend while I was out of town I was shocked and in a state of disbelief My cheeks burned and turned crimson Slowly tears began to roll out of my eyes My friends tried to comfort me but at the time it seemed impossible I left the coffee shop and drove to Joeys house I wanted to hear the truth from his lips Someone must have called Joey and told him that I was on my way to his house because as I pulled in the muddy driveway I saw him He was sitting on a chair on his porch with his head sunk deep in his
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