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Love and Weather in Twelfth Night and Shakespeare's Sonnets

This essay discusses the connections between Shakespeare's Sonnets 18 and 73 and his play, Twelfth Night. The student uses the theme of changing weather to draw connections between the different works.
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Bob's feedback:

"The idea of a correlation between weather and emotions across Shakespeare's work is an interesting one to pursue. However, it can be difficult at times to follow the reasoning and flow of this paper. Part of this has to do with the convoluted plot of Twelfth Night. While it's important to provide context to your readers, you may be introducing too much detail too quickly, especially considering that your focus isn't on the whole of the play's narrative.

Your introduction also creates some confusion as to what your paper's purpose is. Make sure you have a strong thesis statement and build to it throughout the introduction. It may not be necessary to go into any detail at all about the actions of the play since you are focusing on themes, not narrative.

There are frequent instances of awkward wording and grammatical errors that also impact readability. It would be a good idea to work with an editor to correct these and to make sure you are maintaining focus on your main idea throughout the paper."

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