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It was halftime the score was tied The Lower Dauphin Falcon Basketball team was playing with such charisma as we started to soar over the Susquehanna Indians in the second half It was one shot after another and soon we were winning by 2 points The star of the game was of course our number 33 Evan He shined on the court like an angel in disguise The crowd was cheering with excitement as the final minutes were winding down on the scoreboard The game was tied at 44 with 5 seconds remaining and of course it was our angel who came to the rescue again He caught the ball at the edge of the three-point line squared up and let it fly We watched with hopeful eyes as his shot sailed towards the basket It was a success we had beaten our rivals for the second time this season The crowd rushed the court tears of joy fell from the players eyes including Evans After the game we all went over the Evans house to celebrate Many of us not knowing that the rest of the weekend would change our lives We played pool ate pizza and watched the 1100 news to see highlights from the game Evan sat with me and thanked me for coming to watch him After all I wore his jersey and his number painted on my face I left that night at 1230 I was unaware of the big party that was taking place at another house or I would have stayed with Evan so he would not have gone Instead I went home and went to sleep Besides I had a pretty incredible night as it was and I wanted to savor the moments captured All of a sudden I sat up in bed it was 800 on a Monday morning School was cancelled because a fresh layer of snow had fallen on the ground To my surprise
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